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Motor-paced sprint on the track

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Photo by Steffen Prößdorf

EXIF
Camera
Canon Canon EOS-1D X Mark II
Lens
EF35mm f/2 IS USM
Focal length 35 mm
Aperture f / 13.0
Shutter 1/100 s
ISO ISO 125
Exp. comp. 0.0 EV
Shot at 17:18 · Jul 16, 2021
8.0
overall
7.8
composition
7.5
lighting
7.9
exposure
7.7
tones
8.4
technical
Overall
8.0 / 10

A well-executed motor-paced track cycling pan that nails the discipline's core challenge — conveying speed. The blurred crowd, streaked hurdle barrier, and spinning red rear wheel all sell velocity while the two riders stay usably sharp. Motion rendering is the strong suit here. The composition holds both machine and cyclist in a clear left-to-right narrative, though the trailing figure sits close to the right edge with little room ahead. What most holds the shot back is the busy, ad-heavy background competing with the subjects and slightly soft critical focus on the pacer's face. A cleaner isolation would elevate it further.

Composition
7.8 / 10

The left-to-right motion reads clearly and the derny pacer plus following cyclist form a coherent two-part story of the discipline. Both subjects sit low in the frame, giving the track surface weight and a sense of the banking. The cyclist crowds the right edge, though, leaving no breathing room ahead into the direction of travel — reversing that space would improve the flow. The connecting rail between machine and rider is a nice linking element. The blurred spectator tier fills the top third without adding much.

two-subject narrative clear direction of motion subject crowds right edge busy background
Lighting
7.5 / 10

Low, warm side light rakes across both riders from the left, modelling the leathers, the chrome engine, and the cyclist's musculature with pleasing directional emphasis. Late-afternoon sun gives the scene a clean, dimensional quality and lifts the yellow-and-blue livery. Shadows fall long and open, retaining detail. The light is genuinely working for the subject rather than fighting it. The only limitation is the harsh contrast on the bright track surface, which draws a little attention away from the riders themselves.

warm side light good subject modelling bright track distracts
Exposure
7.9 / 10

Exposure is well judged for a bright outdoor track. Highlights on the white jersey and pale banking hold without significant clipping, and shadow detail in the black leathers and the dark background structures survives. The midtones sit comfortably, with the chrome and skin tones cleanly placed. Nothing looks accidental — the frame handles a wide luminance spread from bright concrete to deep shade competently. A touch of highlight recovery on the sunlit track surface would tame the brightest area and keep the eye on the riders.

highlights retained shadow detail held bright track surface
Tones
7.7 / 10

White balance leans slightly warm, appropriate for the golden hour and flattering to skin and chrome. The blue-and-red kit and the red rear wheel provide strong colour anchors against the warm concrete and orange livery. Contrast is healthy without crushing, and saturation stays believable rather than pushed. The blurred crowd dissolves into a soft palette of reds and greens that keeps focus forward. Colour separation between subjects and background is decent, though the multicoloured advertising band muddies the midground somewhat.

strong colour anchors warm white balance cluttered ad band
Technical
8.4 / 10

The 1/100 s shutter is the decisive choice here and it pays off — fast enough with a tracking pan to keep both riders acceptably sharp while the spinning rear wheel dissolves into a red disc and the background streaks convincingly. That is textbook motor-paced technique and the panning is smooth, with minimal vertical wobble. At f/13 the depth of field is generous, keeping the full length of the motorcycle and cyclist in focus, and ISO 125 keeps the file clean with no visible noise. The 35mm on a full-frame body gives a natural, slightly wide perspective that fits both subjects comfortably. Critical focus looks strongest on the mid-frame region; the pacer's face is marginally softer than ideal, a common cost of panning at this speed. A slightly narrower aperture was unnecessary — f/8 to f/11 would have given the same depth with a hair more edge sharpness. Overall the execution is confident and the settings are well matched to the intent.

well-executed pan clean low ISO spinning wheel blur pacer face slightly soft aperture narrower than needed

What would elevate it

1 Repositioning the frame to leave open space ahead of the lead cyclist would improve the sense of forward motion
2 A cleaner shooting angle that places the riders against the smooth track rather than the advertising band would sharpen subject isolation
3 Focus placed precisely on the pacer's face, or a marginally wider aperture around f/8, would recover a touch of critical sharpness

Tags

panning motion blur cycling golden hour side light speed track high contrast motorcycle

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